Dear Annelie... First of all I would like to say that is is a nice blog you have.
I think your writing is very good, you say meaningful things in a short way wich I like. You don't use to many unnessesary words. Good!
I also like that you started by telling us about the assignment that you wrer given, so we know what we are about to read and see if you have good answers to it later on.
Your three words, Love, Peace and Freedom is three great and important words and maybe things that some of us take for granted so I think it's important to discuss them. In the first part where you talk about love, you mentioned that all children diserves to be loved by someone, their parents or other adults. This I think was an important thing, other adults. For them who hasn't got their parents around they should be loved by someone else, grand parents for example. Good point there.
In the part about peace I think it was good that you mentioned that some children can experience war in thier homes. A war can be more then the kind of war that is in Iraq for example. It's important to mention this.
I think you have great solutions and suggestions in the end were you discuss how to make children aware of this problems.
I get a bit curious about your own childhood, how was it for you growing up?
Dear Annelie...
SvaraRaderaFirst of all I would like to say that is is a nice blog you have.
I think your writing is very good, you say meaningful things in a short way wich I like. You don't use to many unnessesary words. Good!
I also like that you started by telling us about the assignment that you wrer given, so we know what we are about to read and see if you have good answers to it later on.
Your three words, Love, Peace and Freedom is three great and important words and maybe things that some of us take for granted so I think it's important to discuss them. In the first part where you talk about love, you mentioned that all children diserves to be loved by someone, their parents or other adults. This I think was an important thing, other adults. For them who hasn't got their parents around they should be loved by someone else, grand parents for example. Good point there.
In the part about peace I think it was good that you mentioned that some children can experience war in thier homes. A war can be more then the kind of war that is in Iraq for example. It's important to mention this.
I think you have great solutions and suggestions in the end were you discuss how to make children aware of this problems.
I get a bit curious about your own childhood, how was it for you growing up?
It was nice reading your blog, well done!
Best wishes
Ulrica